2013년 5월 28일 화요일

Essay Homework #2 - 21st Century



I think there's every reason this 21st century will be much happier. 
-Dalai Lama

As we move into the 21st century, there's what the Bible calls a 'quickening of the spirit.'
-Neale Donald Walsch




It is now 2013. Not a few more years and a decade had humanity celebrated its two thousandth year of existance. Another beginning of the century has brought great motivation for humanity to develope itself. Possessing a constantly curious and progressive nature, humans created expectations to themselves of more accomplishments. And as the century moved on, there showed much more indications and allusions of new changes.



One of the major changes which happened in the 21st century was the advance in daily technology. Merely fifty years ago, people didn't imagine more than 80 percent of us would use something called computers and cell phones. Nowadays, computer companies plan to create touch-laptops and artificially intelligent computers which can be easily used by the handicapped. Televisions are now almost all colored and contain much more channels with the development of satellites. Robots which resemble limbs now support the dismembered or carry out dangerous works in factories. As such, technology is now progessing to the fullest, and thus will achieve facilities in the society while providing greater qualities of life.



Meanwhile, there were greater advance in scientific and medical field of technology. In 1999, NASA reported that by 2020, humans will have advanced enough to make 'real space travels', by 2025, create technology which enables humanity to be able to survive in another planet, and by 2050, people could go to outer space for a honeymoon. Moreover, an American science magazine, the Popular Science, stated that the extensive meical research such as stem cell research will significantly increase the human longevity up to 150 years only by 2040. With this speed, the human population will be able to spread elsewhere in space while also increasing in lifespan.



Finally, the enhancements in technology has brought a society which is dependent upon the internet and the cyber space. One of the significant difference is the economic use of the internet. Online payments occur regularly, and people are able to freely shop inside their homes while their orders are delivered by the internet. Moreover, SNS such as Facebook and Twitter allows the whole world to be connected by a single media source. Furthermore, superficial surgeries and medical information are planned to be provided by the net so that citizens do not have to wait desperately in an emergency. Other services such as food delivery or music are already in use. The significance of this cyber society is that everything has become fast. New and improvised services are provided in a very short time, while the quality of life enhances even more with the development of technology. However, nobody can predict the future. There is likely to be objects, systems, or materials that will later be invented, created, discovered in the future. It is only the beginning of the 21st century, and yet humans have advanced in an amazing pace. Like such, the rest of the century is a mysteriously bright ray of light to humanity.

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  1. I found three spell errors which are "develope, "existance", "meical". You could those errors if you used the spell checker. Also mostly you mentioned about the changes that have already occurred so, maybe come up with some more interesting ideas for next time.
    But it was enjoyable reading it.

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  3. This is a good TOEFL essay! You have your three main changes you expect will happen in the 21st century and you explain them in great depth with plenty of information and examples.Overall, I enjoyed reading your essay!

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  4. Great essay, only that it would have been better if you concentrated on one fact instead of explaining all things. Generally good, though.

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